The Prayer for the Guard

2/13/11 This is for colorguard and winterguard (the flag twerlers) lol. but please come read it! <3 (feel free to tell me of any spelling problems! i know i suck at spelling...)

When the music starts, and we stand proud and true

Please, oh Lord! Let the judges like what we do.

May I stay in rhythm; let me not lose count

For I dread they will see and point me out.

This I well know is not so bad but,

The looks on my instructor face could kill my Grand-Dad!

I ask not for myself, but for the whole,

Let us march in striate lines and not on our toes.

May my hands be true, even though they're black and blue

It's the price we must pay for the tosses that get away.

Protect me oh Lord, from you know who,

They couldn’t catch a cold; you know this is true.

When the show's almost over and the fans on their feet

Keep me smiling that same smile, even though I cannot breath.

Amen!

 

Reviews

[♥ The Other Red ..]

lol. thank you :)

[TheMizFit]

This is a nice poem! Although you do have spelling problems and if it's fine for me to point some:
rhythem should be rhythm
luse should be lose
strate should be straight. :)