Crushed

This is for the person who I like... I'm sorry I ruined your life.

I'm sorry for like you. You know who you are.

I'm sorry I ruined your life.

I'm sorry I ruined your relationship.

I'm sorry you took a break from it.

I'm sorry I made all those posts about you.

I'm sorry I was a bit obsessive.

But you don't understand that I'm either obsessive or I don't care at all there is no in between.

I'm sorry you hate me.

I'm sorry for trying to be your friend.

All I wanted was to see you everyday, to make you laugh, to see you smile, to comfort you if you were sad.

Yes I have a crush on you but I was hoping we could still be friends...

Until you made that clear you wanted nothing to do with me you blocked me on Shapchat after I asked a simple question.

I've had mixed feelings about you ever since then.

Ever since then I burn inside but I'm also calm.

It's like a tornado inside me and I hate that feeling because I've had that feeling for so many years even before you.

Once again...

I'm sorry for liking you. You know who you are.

I'm sorry I ruined your life.

I'm sorry you're straight.

Author's Note

I hope you like my poem! Please leave a rate and a review. Also make sure to read my other poems!

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

what a beautiful poem. I loved the way you expressed your feelings so openly. I wish that guy should meet you soon ....

[CarolinWriter]

Thank you for the compliment but the poem is about a girl.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

ok i wish you would meet her soon.

[Shy Joe]

I don't want to come off as an a*s. I just want to help you grow as a writer.

One of the worst things you can do in a poem is use apologies. Apologies bring out a weak feeling in the reader. Especially when it used throughout the poem. Much like real life, you apologies once, make it sincere, and move on whether it is accepted or not.

Now it's ok to wright about regret. Regret can be felt, regret can stick with you. You want your poems to be powerful, not submissive. Thanks for sharing.

[CarolinWriter]

Thank you. In the future I will try that. Maybe I should make a new Crushed.