my love and I

the story of a lover, one sided lover, loser lover..

 

She appears out of nowhere, like as sun-ray at rise

Her voice contains melody of nature, her deeds are wise

She smiles and make buds bloom

Her grace alleviates all gloom

Her long hairs, night’s darkness, pearl’s shine

Her lips, red and nest to birds of smile,

Her eyes, deep like seas, she is soft, she is fragile,

She with no effort,makes eyes stare at her,

Sighs, wishes, prayers to own, to get close to her,

Far I stand, each time, every day

I too wish in heart, I too pray

But even god knows I can’t have that fairy

I don’t pursue any quality in her match, I look scary

With tears in eyes, seeing she in someone else’s arms, I retard

I walk in solitude, I walk away from all, I cry hard

I complain to god, ask him, why I am a mediocre

Why I am so banal, why my life’s picture is so dull and blur

I see that angel, that fairy, girl of my dreams on earth

And ask god, why without any special attribute, I got the birth

I want to have her, but there are people around

Few look charming, few are intellectuals, few solid on economic ground

I with no enough money , pale and least attractive face

How can I compete with those studs, I can’t win the race

I then hold my pen, my best pal, and its heart cry and bleed with me

And that bleeding change feelings into words, setting my imaginations free

I wish for her, I feel sad, i wish her to be mine, to listen my heart’s rhyme

But I know it is not possible in this birth, perhaps it will happen some other time

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tom]

Today, that highly sought after prize maybe just a little high up on the shelf to reach, but tomorrow it may well be within touching distance !

A finely penned poem, the sentiment within has been well relayed in a pleasing, flowing, rhyming, style!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The pen is a powerful thing, my friend...

Write with your heart and soul and the rest will follow...

She will know the depth of your heart's desire.

Such an awakening write!...well done!~xoxo~:)

[The Quill]

thank you ma'am for the review :) there is no "she",,,this is mere imagination

[priya]

whether the love is one-sided or not... having feelings for someone is scary because it gives then the power to hurt you. mesmerizing..

[The Quill]

Thanks for your kind review :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Lovely write.. A heart-throbbing tale.. :))

[The Quill]

thanks for the review :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You'remost welcome :)

[AYAANA IBSHAAN]

i love this poem :) it is amazing and soo well written

[The Quill]

thanks ma'am :)

[Matching Socks]

So sad. :(
To love someone, that does not return the feelings.

[The Quill]

thanks ma'am