I love you....

An imagination of the moment when one loves someone but can't tell that fellow....it is painful,

I love u, love u a lot but don’t know how to say it,
I am colligating courage & trying to develop that wit,
The life is carrying me towards an endless journey,
Every moment I am enduring a typical agony.
Crying in heart, tying to hide tears but they are shedding,
I am striving, I am beseeching, I am begging,
Dear, I just want to give you a clue,
To make you understand that,’ I love you’.
I love you dear, love you more than my life,
But my love is eternal & not of stereotypical type,
I don’t say that always remain with me,
But if you are a vein then I wish to be the supporting tree.
I wish to be there when conditions are hapless,
I wish to be with you whenever you feel restless,
I wish to be the first one to wipe your tears,
& I wish to make you smile by alleviating your all fears.
Till my last breath I want to love you,
But don’t want anything in return from you,
Seeing your smile gives me a reason to smile,
When you say, “Thanks”, my world stops for a while.
But I want to tell you what my heart say,
Every moment what I wish, what I pray,
I wish for getting your pain, your tears, yes it’s true,
I don’t know anything; just know that I love you.
Your shining eyes seem more fascinating than stars,
Your achievements are lovely then any other rewards,
For me you are more beautiful then a rose covered with dew,
My heart; I just want to say, I love you.

Reviews

[michele vera]

There are no words to TellYou abouy How Treasured This Poem is To Me.....I Have Tell You, The Love You so Poetically Endearing Described, is The Absolute Depiction Of The Eternal Love, I Have Sought in My Life, but Most Importantly..............The Eternal Love I Desire So Truly To Give...........I Met A Very Special Man a Few Years Ago........He was and Still IS Very Much is The LOve Of My Life.....This Poem Fit How I Feel About Him Like The Perfect-Fitted Glove............I Could Go On and On, but this is a Review...To Keep This Somewhat Brief, Your Poem Moved A Thousand More Mountains For The Unending Love I Have For This Man.............Beyond Perfect Poem!!!

[The Quill]

ohh this is more than a review....i m much thankful to u ma'am for this beautiful review :) i have no words to define my happiness after this review :) thanks a lot...

[michele vera]

Iam Beond Gratefand Happy, that You RedMy Reiew..... wouldve Sid so Much More........This Was and Is The Best andMost Touching Poem I Ever Read........Your Words Touch The Deepest Part Of My Heart and Soul.......BlessAll That You Are....................

[michele vera]

So VerySorry About TheSpelling Errors......My KeyBoard is isn't working Properly! I Would'e Liked To sayA Bit More......

[The Quill]

thank you sooooo much ma'am :) may god bless u :)

[The Quill]

Spellings don't matter when feelings are there :)

[michele vera]

Very Very True, Thank You For Understanding............You Are So Very Kind............

[John Anderson]

Spelling ALWAYS matters in literature.

[The Quill]

yeah sir, i agree but most humbly i wish to say that comments are to express the feelings, it is not a literary review or proof reading..

[keatsgb]

A beautiful poem...so accurate and so eloquently penned!

[The Quill]

Thank you so much for your review :)

[michele vera]

Oh My God, that was So Beautiful...............It is exactly how I Feel. it's as if You and I share the Samemind,thoughtsandemotions.....Loveis self-less and that'sHowILoveMy Man.....MyManisMy Guardian
AngelandI Guard his Soul,Heart,Body andMindas Well as His spiri. i Truly found my UniCorn in 2006.
Joe Limone Was My Highest Living Miracle....I would make High and Extreme SacriFices for His Love.....I would die just to hold his Hand, and Lookinto the Unending Depths of his Eyes, Body Mind and soul......His spirit is Forver withn Me...I always feel Him----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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[Rachelle]

A picture of love in its unconditional form. Beyond the temporal and ephemeral is the love ignited by a soul to another soul.

[Matching Socks]

So lovely. You are such a romantic. :)

[The Quill]

thank you ma'am :)

[Dhaye]

This is so sweet and romantic, Quill. The lines are so powerful!
Going to my library. Keep writing.

[The Quill]

thank you ma'am :)

[The Quill]

i am honored that you added it in your favorites :)

[lovelife]

this poem is very deep, I love the imagery, and I love i feel like I am there in the poem.

[The Quill]

this is a beautiful compliment :) thanks

[lovelife]

your very welcome

[emmajoy]

Such a beautiful declaration said - in my mind, as if you're whispering across space to the one you adore, love, idolise, want- and need. You've truly shown your heart in your words. Beautiful.

'But if you are a vein then I wish to be the supporting tree.'

[The Quill]

Thank you so much for your kind and lovely review ma'am :)

[emmajoy]

My pleasure.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This sounds like unconditional love in the highest admiration...

I can feel the love overflowing within every line...

Such a sweet and Romantic write!..well done! :)

P.S. I agree with John Anderson on the word "U".. it's best to write it properly, not in text slang.
(just my humble opinion)

[The Quill]

thank you so much ma'am...i will surely never use "u" inplace of you in formal writings

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's just my humble opinion...you are most welcome... no need to call me ma'am. lol :)

[The Quill]

:) thankss, your opinion is right

[Parimal Pratyush]

Brilliant comparisons.. Some 'never heard before' feelings that I noticed. Great work :)

[The Quill]

hey thank you for your kind review :)

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

This is a very beautiful love poem. It has good flow, and the words are candid and honest to the end.

[The Quill]

Thanks a lot for reviewing it :) m honored