Mother Nature...

A poem about the personification of mother nature..

I was there, hiding though
Making her feel unaware of me
She was walking, and things were strange
Her steps were causing nature to change
Flowers were adorning her path, themselves
Birds were chirping, all as holy bells
She touched a small bud, touch gentle as silk
It blossomed into a flower, color, pinch of orange in milk
Anklet then touched a dead tussock, from yellow it turned green
Vibes, after passing nearby her, carrying fragrances of world, unseen
She then went to the pond, lilies and golden fishes in it
A magic was dragging me, I couldn't resist
I was there, hiding though
Making her feel unaware of me
She sat on its wall, splashed few drops on her face, her lips, finest curls
Amazed was I, after touching her, they all were pearls
Magic was all around, blessings in the air
Her gestures were nothing but epitome of care
Her fingers were playing in the water, stirring it, making waves
And clouds in the sky were all gathering, taking magical shapes
On my knees I bent, bowed my head to that fairy, couldn't hide
She was beautiful, gracious, perfection personified
She came near, touched me, I was all calm, no contemplation,
Bliss was there, I was witnessing peace, satiation,
Closing my eyes, I was feeling the warmth, the affection
She was the princess of land and skies, the goddess, Mother Nature

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. Birds were chirping, all as holy bells ~ She touched a small bud, touch gentle as silk ~ It blossomed into a flower, color, pinch of orange in milk.. ' how beautiful those words - picture painted gently and subtly, true, not at all chocolate-box but very real.

You're obviously someone who cares about Mother Nature, who notices her changing moods, the births, the every changing colours, their vitality or subtlety... This is lovely.

[The Quill]

thank you ma'am for your review :)

[Ayushi]

Lovely write and imagination..
I liked the concept too :)

[Matching Socks]

You write so very romantically and beautifully.
It's always a pleasure to read one of yours.

[The Quill]

thank you so much ma'a m:)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Wow this is a poem after my own heart, for I do adore nature so... and the way you delicately personified Mother Nature was simply beautiful. Your gentle rhyme and gorgeous imagery here really made this write a pleasure to read. Wonderful work, friend.

[The Quill]

Thank u so much got your beautiful review :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Of course, it is a beautiful poem, my review doesn't do it justice. :)

[The Quill]

That is a humble gesture k :) ur review brought motivation to me :)

[lovelife]

wow this poem is very beautiful, I love how every thing just flows and you don't have to stop and be like wait what does the writer mean by this.

[The Quill]

Hey thanks ma'am for the review :)

[lovelife]

Your very welcome

[John Anderson]

A very beautifully expressed poem that is really well written.

[The Quill]

Thank you sir :)