My Friend

My Friend

A Poem by Abhinav
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Another of those friendship poems

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My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.

I, then feel bad and a lot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.

I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.

My dear friend, I miss you a lot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.

Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.

© 2010 Abhinav


Author's Note

Abhinav
sorry about the font, if you get any problems, I just wanted to try some colours

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coloring z gud so never mind ...
nice write ..:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is nice. Your emotions show strong through your writing. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow! what a dedication to a beloved friend
this reminds me of my closest friend with whom I share my personal feelings
your rhyme scheme is simple but very well organised and good
you have written a simple but touching poem
Keep up the good work!
~Aaradhya

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this poem. I am guess your friend has passed away. The flow of this poem is wonderful and smooth. You topic shines through completely.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a really good poem. I love the feeling and truth behind the words, and the entire poem has a really nice flow to it.

~Neeeks ♥

Posted 14 Years Ago


anyone would love this beautiful tribute to friendship.
perfectly expressed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A beautiful poem of friendship. Thank you for the internet. The young people can hold on to good friends. Poem was well written and I like how you ended the poem. Thank you. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


great. :)
this reminds me of my friends. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Dev
Good write.. Flows well.. A good appreciation for a friend / friends ..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Same as i feel too.
nice job

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Abhinav
Abhinav

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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