My Friend

Another of those friendship poems

My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.

I, then feel bad and a lot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.

I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.

My dear friend, I miss you a lot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.

Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.

Author's Note

sorry about the font, if you get any problems, I just wanted to try some colours

Reviews

[Haifa]

oh my.. rated !

[Red Brick Keshner]

Boy, that really tugs at the heart. This is a wonderful tribute as well as a testament to true love, true friendship.

[Soul Magic✯]

beautifully penned. you definitely showed what true friendship is all about in this piece. very heartfelt and loved the flow.

[Darruesh Eetraydes]

Don't mind the font at all. It actually seems to go along nicely with your poem. The poem is so from the heart that you just can not like it. Good job

[Lilly]

such a beautiful poem - clearly shows the importance and beauty of friendship

[cest la vie]

Colors are representative of friendship..
A lovely write and your friend is most blessed to have these words on their behalf.
Nicely done and thank for sharing this with us all.

[Nayan]

A very true poem of friendship!

"Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me."

Thanks for sharing Abhinav!

[Huggy Bear]

You are really good at talking about friendship. Good Job:)

[Anna Kay]

my god a freaking love it!!!!!! its so sweet and cute! ita has alot of emotion and i really like that but i was a lil sad when its lost it flow a lil bit great job though!!!

[Francez]

The message is good, but it's a pity that the flow slips in some places (line 3 of 3rd stanza, line 3 of the last stanza).

And the sentence: 'I, then feel bad and a lot of pain.' sounds a bit forced.

I think with some rework this would be a wonderful tribute to your friend. :-)