Goodbye,Goodbye

It happens, that when you are close to someone, their loss changes your life forever

Its difficult to say, goodbye
after only one life together
But I promise dear friend
I will remember you for ever


It was so cruel

What life did to you
I had lost a friend
So genuine and true


Now all thats left
are the memories of you
Pictures and stories
of the things we'd gone through


Each day, every night
I think about you
Of the laughs, of the jokes
and the things you might do


No one can ever take your place
I can promise you this
Its hard to find someone like you
you'll always be missed



Its difficult to say, goodbye
after only one life together
But I promise dear friend
I'll forget you never

(Dedicated to my friend,who died 3 years ago)

Author's Note

Dedicated to my friend,who died 2 years ago.

Reviews

[yashasvi]

really sorry for d loss....but a nice write ...
real gud hand with devices...
good ink! :)

[Tate Morgan]

a BEAUTIFUL THOUGHT

[cest la vie]

Wonderful heartfelt tribute..
Well written and delivered..

this is a lovely write here..

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great tribute to your friend and the love that you had...Keep the gifted pen flowing. Sunflower

[Dana Kathryn]

Aww this is very Beautiful,and you can tell that it is from deep inside the heart and soul.This is a very good write.I can feel the raw emotion as it flows so wonderfully! Very well done :)

[Darruesh Eetraydes]

You really pulled at my heart strings with this one. This was wonderfully written.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Very touching and real. Thanks for sharing.

[Anski]

Sorry for your friend first, i would knoe exactly how you feel, i too have lost someone dear.
as far the poem goes, it was lovely, the flow was a bit off, but it was an excellent tribute

[EMW]

I"m really sorry for your loss. This is really incredible.

[Yani De Los Reyes]

I'm so sorry for your loss. It's so filled with emotion it kind of hit me there. Good job though. Even if the flow of rhythm isn't so straight, the poem was very nice. Once again, I'm sorry for your loss.