I Love You Girl

How I feel about my girl......

You're the first thing I think of
Each morning when I rise
You're the last thing I think of
When I close my eyes

You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I cannot deny
You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be

Wish I could put it into words
Tell you just what it is I feel
Put my soul into a song
Prove to you it’s real

You are everything I want
You're so pure and true
I love you with everything I have
And I love everything that you do.

Author's Note

Not exactly a poem in that sense,just a random write about feelings and stuff

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow of this poem is smooth and I hope she liked the poem when you gave it to her.

[Veronica]

This is like a message of love, put into a poem, and it takes a lot of thought to do that.
I'll admit, I probably couldn't do this, and this isn't one of those sappy love poems either, it actually has true feeling to it.
Best of luck writing poems-
Veronica

[Tainted Angel]

I gotta admit, this is everything I feel for my angel. It's all there, down pat. I'm glad you managed to get this posted. I think I would be too busy with the one I love to write all this down.

[Anna Kay]

awww !!! its so dang cute! i love it ! im adding this is my library.... did u write this for someone SPECIAL??? its really sweet and down to earth and you really let your feelings out! thats a great start!

-AnnaBanana!

[Red Brick Keshner]

An open and honest expression. Nice blend of lines. Just watch out when some would criticise the use of familiar lines like 'blink of an eye', etc. It is very pleasing to read.