....that was all my mistakes....goodbye....

Time to move on

I admit I made a mistake-
overstepping some boundaries,
which made me look fake.

I always said I would never do the things I did,
and that is the reason it is so hard for you to forgive.

It's been so long,
so many times we said we'd try
only to turn around
and make each other cry.

Remember how it was when we first started out,
so much alike, we shared every thought.
We fell so fast, maybe fell in love too soon,
Made a huge decision that now we cannot undo.

I admit my mistakes, but can you admit yours?
I have paid for what I've done
as you have paid for yours,
so why is it like this?
We can't even talk.
You call me liar and say you don't care.
all the while my love for you is still there.

I never meant to hurt you,
never wanted to cause you any pain.
Since you left me few months ago,
my life hasn't been the same.

I owe you so much.
I have so much to prove to you,
so I will end this with the hardest thing I'll ever have to do.
Goodbye baby...I will always be in love with you.
But never let you to come again
And spoil my life..

Reviews

[Dara]

I can really imagine this to be a spoken word piece. Very well put together and from your heart. Break ups can be so very difficult but I think it is good to always remember the love shared as you seem to be able to do.

[abhishek srivastava]

Yes, its tooo difficult to forget..but i think its gud to forget..but we unfortunately people like me are unable in doing so.

[Najam Us Saher]

Not many realise their mistakes and apologise. It takes brave heart to do so. But I do feel people realise and apologise and that's what you just did. I like the tone of this poem. You have really expressed your feelings well.

[abhishek srivastava]

Thnk u so mch...if feelings are real it always been expressed welll

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right. You're welcome.