feelings without you

Here i described how i feel without....

Day is passing with a constant speed,
But you are the one whom i need.
Not anything matters what i have,
I ensconce only the memories you gave.
On the outside,
I act all macho and masculine,
But I'm broken from deep within.
At first sight, nothing seems to be wrong,
But to introspection, my life feels like a sad song,
Without u baby everything seems bleak,
Come back soon I've become very weak,
I want to talk to you like before,
I want to share those reminiscence strangled in my heart at core..!!!

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. Beautifully written. Well done.

[abhishek srivastava]

Thnk u so mch..

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[Aravindwrites]

You penned it perfectly abhishek, keep writing more...!!!

[abhishek srivastava]

Thnx a millions

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Beautifully penned!
There are grammatical errors over here, even though the latter choice of vocab is intelligent.
I'm sure you are very close to science.

[abhishek srivastava]

Yupp I'm....
By the way thnxx
Nd i appreciate u for telling me mistakes

[APOORVA]

interesting piece of work

[abhishek srivastava]

Jii shukriya