Against All Odds

Against All Odds

A Poem by Abhishek
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the poem entitled ‘’Against All Odds’’ depicts the kind of love that transcends the social barriers and which does not give in to challenges.

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I'll gently brush her flowing hair,
If she falters, I'll be there. 
Once I’ve held her hand, 
how can I let go? If needed, 
I'll give my life, this I know. 
Never have I judged her by caste or creed, 
So why should I corrupt her pure deed? 
Yes, I know she's already wed, 
But should I forget her for that, instead?

© 2024 Abhishek


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@Abhishek! good write and good message.
We love by magic but we should live by logic ...my 2 cents! She is living her life yes you must move on too.
Your poem is finely written and well rhymed. Thankyou for sharing

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

11 Hours Ago

Thank you so much for your constructive review :)
Oh my god 😳....
Maybe ..

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Abhishek

11 Hours Ago

maybe ? :)
It is a form of altruistic love, where the feeling continues to exist, but without selfishness, without the need for possession. Very touching!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Abhishek

11 Hours Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing this :)

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Added on August 23, 2024
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Abhishek
Abhishek

Patna, Jehanabad, India



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Hi This is Abhishek, An Engineering Student From IIT Dhanbad in india. i write poems by my own passion. more..

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