Feeling Broken

My heart is totally confused what happened actually?

The heart wants to drown in the fear of love,

 It turns out that it is not even a concern

We still made up our mind to go because

Other than that I have no way.

Aren't you ashamed to say the same thing every time

What did she even say,

 I did not understand anything

Where did you learn to turn things around so much?

There is a lot of pain in the chest but I do not want to show it

still love but don't want to express

What did you say so deeply by hurting

I don't want to have this relationship again.

Author's Note

It's Actually three different short poems that i merged.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Evidently much misunderstanding and confusion in this poem. Neither party , it seems, understands the cause of a breakup, but do know the pain that comes along with it.This a is so typical of people who do not communicate their feeling honestly. Perhaps a split would not have happened in the first place.
Well done!
Best, Betty

[Abhishek]

Yup you are so right about that...
Thank you so much for reviewing😊

[jennifer little]

great poem i enjoyed it great read , you did a very good job great flow of the poem keep up the good work

[Abhishek]

Thank you so much for appreciating me for it.


Abhishek

[Lathen Griffiths]

Hi there Abhishek, they work well together I thought and seem to carry through the theme.

Lathen

[Abhishek]

Thats why i did it.
Thanks for reviewing..

Abhishek