Feeling Broken

My heart is totally confused what happened actually?

The heart wants to drown in the fear of love,

 It turns out that it is not even a concern

We still made up our mind to go because

Other than that I have no way.

Aren't you ashamed to say the same thing every time

What did she even say,

 I did not understand anything

Where did you learn to turn things around so much?

There is a lot of pain in the chest but I do not want to show it

still love but don't want to express

What did you say so deeply by hurting

I don't want to have this relationship again.

Author's Note

It's Actually three different short poems that i merged.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Evidently much misunderstanding and confusion in this poem. Neither party , it seems, understands the cause of a breakup, but do know the pain that comes along with it.This a is so typical of people who do not communicate their feeling honestly. Perhaps a split would not have happened in the first place.
Well done!
Best, Betty

[Abhishek]

Yup you are so right about that...
Thank you so much for reviewing😊

[M. J. Smith]

Love is complicated. Relationships tangle like creepers on a tree trunk. Life twists like worms in a bait bucket. But somehow, we muddle through. Maybe, like Radar O'Rielly remarked in Mash, "It helps if you're not too bright, Sir." 😀
Drifters know that sometimes it is better to roll with the tide rather than swim against it.

[Kim S.]

I like this, i can feel your emotions through out this, pain does go away eventually I know from experience.

[Abhishek]

Loneliness is more painful than anything..
Thank you so much for giving such a nice review😊

[Ada]

It's good to have an outlet for release when pain becomes too great. Eventually with time we find a way to reconcile what happened in a relationship because we need to keep moving and aspiring.

[Abhishek]

Thanks a lot for review this in such a nice manner

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

I can really feel this write, This is so good
and so emotional

[Fabian G. Franklin]

These verses blend the feeling of love lost into a palpable experience. Very nicely done, poet. I enjoyed.

[Soren]

Very good. conveyed common feelings in many relationships.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you for your review, Soren. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

Love is a Magnet… drawn to each other through thick and thin…. Sometimes you Win in ♟ Chess … Checkmate…. gently, Pat

[Abhishek]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on my poetry.....

[Sami Khalil]

Very powerful lines and very straightforward about what transpired in this relationship. I like your honesty and how you express your feelings. Hopefully things will work out for the best. Keep it real, search for the good.

[Abhishek]

Thank you so much for such a beautiful and constructive Review.
Thanks for visiting😊

[Sami Khalil]

You are so welcome. See you around..,

[Sami Khalil]

"There is a lot of pain in the chest but I do not want to show it
still love but don't want to express"