Feeling Broken

Feeling Broken

A Poem by Abhishek
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My heart is totally confused what happened actually?

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The heart wants to drown in the fear of love,
 It turns out that it is not even a concern
We still made up our mind to go because
Other than that I have no way.

Aren't you ashamed to say the same thing every time
What did she even say,
 I did not understand anything
Where did you learn to turn things around so much?

There is a lot of pain in the chest but I do not want to show it
still love but don't want to express
What did you say so deeply by hurting
I don't want to have this relationship again.

© 2022 Abhishek


Author's Note

Abhishek
It's Actually three different short poems that i merged.

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Evidently much misunderstanding and confusion in this poem. Neither party , it seems, understands the cause of a breakup, but do know the pain that comes along with it.This a is so typical of people who do not communicate their feeling honestly. Perhaps a split would not have happened in the first place.
Well done!
Best, Betty

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Yup you are so right about that...
Thank you so much for reviewing😊



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Love is complicated. Relationships tangle like creepers on a tree trunk. Life twists like worms in a bait bucket. But somehow, we muddle through. Maybe, like Radar O'Rielly remarked in Mash, "It helps if you're not too bright, Sir." 😀
Drifters know that sometimes it is better to roll with the tide rather than swim against it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like this, i can feel your emotions through out this, pain does go away eventually I know from experience.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Loneliness is more painful than anything..
Thank you so much for giving such a nice review�.. read more
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Ada
It's good to have an outlet for release when pain becomes too great. Eventually with time we find a way to reconcile what happened in a relationship because we need to keep moving and aspiring.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for review this in such a nice manner
Evidently much misunderstanding and confusion in this poem. Neither party , it seems, understands the cause of a breakup, but do know the pain that comes along with it.This a is so typical of people who do not communicate their feeling honestly. Perhaps a split would not have happened in the first place.
Well done!
Best, Betty

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Yup you are so right about that...
Thank you so much for reviewing😊
I can really feel this write, This is so good
and so emotional

Posted 2 Years Ago


These verses blend the feeling of love lost into a palpable experience. Very nicely done, poet. I enjoyed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very good. conveyed common feelings in many relationships.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, Soren. truly, Pat
Love is a Magnet… drawn to each other through thick and thin…. Sometimes you Win in ♟ Chess … Checkmate…. gently, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on my poetry.....
Very powerful lines and very straightforward about what transpired in this relationship. I like your honesty and how you express your feelings. Hopefully things will work out for the best. Keep it real, search for the good.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such a beautiful and constructive Review.
Thanks for visiting😊
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are so welcome. See you around..,
"There is a lot of pain in the chest but I do not want to show it
still love but don't want to express"

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on January 18, 2022
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Tags: Love, Romance, Emotions, writerscafe, broken, sad.

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Abhishek
Abhishek

Patna, Jehanabad, India



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Hi This is Abhishek, An Engineering Student From IIT Dhanbad in india. i write poems by my own passion. more..

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