Pleasant Weather

Today Weather is so pretty.

How nice is this weather

as the sun is coming

my heart with the sweet sounds of birds

greatly affected

I feel like I can't do anything today

And just sit throughout the day and enjoy this pleasant moment

Today I feel like eating pakoras and if I get tea with it then it will be more fun.

It is only sad moment that if i had spent this time with my loved one, then it would have been a different matter.

I miss her so much now

I don't know how she will be and what she will be doing

I wish she was with me and I would talk to her

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kim S.]

This is so wonderful, much enjoyed this write. you need to write more poems I can read.

[Abhishek]

thank you so much for giving me appreciation for this.
now i will more poems by heart.

Abhishek

[Lathen Griffiths]

A sunny day can improve our outlook on the world by tenfold, it’s never easy not being with those who we care for though.

A nice piece of poetry that resonated.

Kind regards

Lathen

[Abhishek]

Thanks a lot for recognising it as a niece poetry.

Abhishek