Pleasant Weather

Pleasant Weather

A Poem by Abhishek
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Today Weather is so pretty.

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How nice is this weather
as the sun is coming
my heart with the sweet sounds of birds
greatly affected
I feel like I can't do anything today
And just sit throughout the day and enjoy this pleasant moment
Today I feel like eating pakoras and if I get tea with it then it will be more fun.
It is only sad moment that if i had spent this time with my loved one, then it would have been a different matter.
I miss her so much now
I don't know how she will be and what she will be doing
I wish she was with me and I would talk to her

© 2022 Abhishek


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This is sweet.
hopeful..

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beauty shared is beauty multiplied. But one the one we live is far away, even the most breathtaking sunset can seem colorless. Well written, my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Missing someone is always difficult. It is contrasted with the positive feeling of pleasant weather. This is a nice contrast and balance. It is downbeat because it ends of the feeling of missing. This is sad which is probably what you intended.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for appreciating me😀😊😁
This is ever so lovely, and emotional as well

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing😍
In this lovely poem, you are combining the pleasant weather with romance. Very fitting sir and right on the money.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for keeping your beautiful thoughts on this poem
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

My pleasure. Any time. See you around. Keep posting.
"I miss her so much now
I don't know how she will be and what she will be doing
I wish she was with me and I would talk to her"

Posted 2 Years Ago


"my heart with the sweet sounds of birds
greatly affected
I feel like I can't do anything today"

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful weather tends to put our minds at ease and in a dream state. It calms our souls into revelry and peace. And it is that place where we yearn for love more. Very nice poem thank you for sharing your work with us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing this poem
nice moment of enjoyment in eating Pakoras, but it would be much better with your love around.
very nice. I would suggest using less words and more imagery, but keep it up, it's good.
Best, Betty

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for such a nice Review
It's amazing how a day with good weather can send such good vibes. I'm feeling it today myself. But I don't see poems about it often, so I'm happy to see one. Tyfs

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thanks for giving such a nice Review.
i hope your monday was a good day.

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Added on January 17, 2022
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Abhishek
Abhishek

Patna, Jehanabad, India



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