True Love

True Love

A Poem by Abhishek
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in this poem the poet said about his love story when he is in some confusion that he is beleiving a right person?

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whenever i asked god for something,
Then then I asked them for you only
The limit was reached when God asked
How do you trust someone so much?
Then I said when you love someone to passionately, 
then it does not matter what that person is, for you she is always the most beautiful in the world
and becomes trustworthy.
due to some misunderstanding i thought i lost her.
Sometimes it feels like trusting a wrong person
Since when did she become unfaithful ?,
I was living in loneliness now,
burned all her pictures,
life is being deserted without her.
But it is said that if you want someone sincerely, then
Even the universe takes you to meet her.
This is what happened today, she suddenly appeared in front of me
And looking in the eyes started saying
that I tried so hard to be without you but I can never live.
My life without you is like lemon juice without lemons or like a ship without a pilot.
i love you so much and i never want to lose you.

© 2022 Abhishek


Author's Note

Abhishek
ignore grammar problems and please give a review how is it?

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There is a prophet in the old testament who married a harlot. Time and again she betrayed him, cheated, lied. But every time, he forgave her. How often did he want to tell God to just forget the whole thing? But he kept the faith. This is the story this poem brings to mind. Well written, Sir. Such anguish. And yet, the power of forgiveness. Beautifully done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

You are right that power of forgiveness is almighty...
Thanks for reviewing...



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A great thought and philosophy, but beware the thorns of the rose. Such a nice story and happy if you are willing to bleed for your belief and love. Forgiveness is the most wonderful thing for the one that forgives. It frees you and how you feel is what is important. I enjoyed the write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


There is a prophet in the old testament who married a harlot. Time and again she betrayed him, cheated, lied. But every time, he forgave her. How often did he want to tell God to just forget the whole thing? But he kept the faith. This is the story this poem brings to mind. Well written, Sir. Such anguish. And yet, the power of forgiveness. Beautifully done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

You are right that power of forgiveness is almighty...
Thanks for reviewing...
Sometimes it feels like trusting a wrong person
Since when did she become unfaithful ?,
I was living in loneliness now,

I know this feeling, This is quite full of wisdom.
very nicely presented

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Sometimes i feel like i m very alone and no one here can understand my feelings.
Loneliness h.. read more
So much wisdom shared here dear poet about True Love. You are very honest about it. May you find that true love and stick with one another.
Kudos!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

i hope my dream come true and get a true love
thank you so much for reviewing......
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

All true and well said. You are welcome.
"Then I said when you love someone to passionately,
then it does not matter what that person is, for you she is always the most beautiful in the world
and becomes trustworthy."

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"But it is said that if you want someone sincerely, then
Even the universe takes you to meet her.
This is what happened today, she suddenly appeared in front of me"

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love always heals when you least expect it; this was a happy ending. Correct errors please. Read aloud, it's always a good idea... Nice writing...
Best,
Betty


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

can you highlight the errors please, i will improve it.

Abhishek
great poem i enjoyed it great flow to it keep writing and keep up the good work

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such a constructive Review
jennifer little

2 Years Ago

your welcome very much
Nice meaning here, I believe it true that fate helps us cross paths with those who are meant to be in our lives,


Lathen

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

yes you thoughts are right
many many thanks for reviewing

Abhishek
I have been there, Sometimes I wish I never met my ex, some times I am glad I did, because it taught me who I should and shouldn't trust, Being hurt stinks.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek

2 Years Ago

Really Thankful for reviewing this.
I hope your monday goes well

All the best... read more

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Added on January 16, 2022
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Abhishek

Patna, Jehanabad, India



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