Real Admirer

This poem is dedicated to my love, i have written for her when we met each other at first time.

I know your lovers are thousand,
But someone like me is found in lakhs.
Your smile hurts me like this,
Seeing you my heart melts like wax.
When you talk to me, I get lost in your feeling,
I get intoxicated by the scent of your hair,
Did not know that you have such deep and intoxicating eyes,
Now whenever I see, I get immersed in it,
There is a lot of love for you but I do not know how to express it.
Whenever you come in front of me, then I can not even say anything.

Author's Note

What do you think about my poem please Review it.

Reviews

[Lathen Griffiths]

I think your poem carries across the idea of wanting to be with someone but maybe not quite having the confidence to let them know. The title carries well throughout the poem as there was a feeling of admiration towards this other person, perhaps the righter is actually in awe of them.

I found these lines of yours interesting ‘ Now whenever I see, I get immersed in it,
There is a lot of love for you but I do not know how to express it’ it can be so hard telling others our true feelings,

Kind regards

Lathen

[Abhishek]

Thanks a lot for giving some time in reviewing.

[slfisher89]

Captures the deep infatuation and anxiety of a crush

[Betty Hermelee]

You must have believed this person has a lot of lovers, but maybe you are the best one. For you, she is everything, sensual, intoxicating; but the problem is you don't know how to express this to her. Many people are shy at first and become tongue-tied when meting a beautiful person. You seem to be so overwhelmed by her. It takes practice to open up to someone else . Nice writing.
Best, Betty

[lessa (kenzie)]

Now whenever I see, I get immersed in it,
There is a lot of love for you but I do not know how to express it.

I really like this part, such a wonderful write, intriguing as well as lovely

[Abhishek]

Thank you so much for appreciating.....

[Soren]

A sense of longing and feelings of inadequacy are things that we all have from time to time. Well done

[M. J. Smith]

Bet this is saved in a perfumed box somewhere with dried flowers and sweet moments. This would make a beautiful Valentine's Day tribute. Well written.

[Abhishek]

Thank you for reviewing in such a nice manner😋😍

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

i agree with Lathen on this write, this is very good

[Abhishek]

Thank you so much for reviewieng it..😊😊

[poetgurl]

quite an interesting read, enjoyed it

[Abhishek]

Thank you very much

[Kim S.]

i really enjoyed this, full of delicate emotion

[Abhishek]

Thanks a lot for giving such a beautiful review