My Mind, My Universe.

My Mind, My Universe.

A Poem by Abeer Tarek

"God didn't create one universe, God created billions, one in each's mind, and people either choose to embrace it, or choose to destroy it.

I wish we could see souls like we see eyes, I wish we could hear hearts like we hear voices, and I wish we could feel minds like we feel touches.

It's hard to explain how blissful it is, how blissful love is, how blissful writing is, and how blissful the mind is.

Sometimes I feel lonely, but then I wander, and I wonder, how shall we all be different unless each of us has their own universe, their own ocean and their own star.

It amazes me, it amazes me how can completely different universes fall for each other, how can their souls be one, and how can their feelings collide.

I wish it was easier to live but it's not, it's difficult indeed that's why it's very rare, very rare to live and very rare to love.

It's funny how this entire universe can be satisfied with the tiniest of things, like a subtle smile from a lover, a moment of a rain's smell or a hug to bring back your soul.

When I close my eyes I see secrets, secrets that fill up my being, secrets I wish I could tell a friend, a soul mate or even a stranger.

My universe is vast, dark and happy, and I wish I can fill it up with love."

© 2016 Abeer Tarek


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This was really great, I loved the thoughts and ideas contained in this

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wooow nice , I love it 😍

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Very deep I have to admit from a youngster..well done on a very imaginative and inspiring prose..keep it up..feel free to view my writings you might like some..be blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abeer Tarek

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your support! and I would love to!
A universe inside of us. Very good. I like the idea alot. I like the way you bring the idea and detail it, it is very understandable and how it is that you mix it with others as well. Some word choices I think you could of found a better word for it but it is ok, every ones writing is different. Thank you

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Tags: poetry, rain, life, love, despair, happiness, strength

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Abeer Tarek
Abeer Tarek

Cairo, New Cairo, Egypt



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I am a seventeen year old poet/writer, I have been writing since a very long time and this is what I enjoy the most, I am a non-native English speaker yet I enjoy writing in English more than my own l.. more..

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