Bloody Snow

You can take this to describe a number of things; whatever it means in your head. For me, it reminded me of the time the Germans were fighting against the Russians in the snow in WW2.

As the brilliant
snow drops pristine flakes gently

Red smears across white.

Author's Note

Please have your say on the above haiku. I will appreciate anyone who will suggest me how to improve my writing.

Reviews

[Ornithic]

This is really pretty, and the colour imagery is brilliant.

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Appreciate your views.

[Sami Khalil]

We can take this great write as the blood spills from wars on the pristine snow which denotes purity of hearts. A war of aggresion against the innocents.

[Abdur Raqeeb]

I really feel sorry for the innocent civilians who died during the world wars. Thank you for your review.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . You are welcome.