SLEEPLESSNESS

SLEEPLESSNESS

A Poem by Abdul Rahman S
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In this poem,I have tried to show the difficulties of the people who don't get proper sleep at nights and are longing for it.

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Oh my Sleep Oh my Sleep,Where are you?
All the Night All the Night,Didn't find you;
Lying on my bed,Closing my eyes,
Like a good Lover,I waited for you,
But All the Night All the Night,Didn't find you;
Lying on my back,Lying face down,
Turning to my left,Turning to my right,
I searched you everywhere,
But All the Night All the Night,Didn't find you;
Hugging my pillow,Rolling on the bed,
I tried Falling asleep,But Fell down instead;
Oh my Sleep Oh my Sleep,Where are you?
All the Night All the Night,Didn't find you.

© 2015 Abdul Rahman S


Author's Note

Abdul Rahman S
My thinking is that this poem can be related to for all those who have sleeplessness.

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This one has nice rhythm like a song to it. Although your take has shades of humor and I really appreciate it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this so well and the nearer you get to the alarm time the more worried you get! lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes I have been here a time or two, certainly not cool:(
This was well written and delivered, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think most of us can relate to this! Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good one... happens very often with me too... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, I can relate to that! Good write Abdul.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helen Crutchett

9 Years Ago

Please call me Helena. I know you are being polite, but just plain Helena will do! :)
Abdul Rahman S

9 Years Ago

Yes Helena :)
Helen Crutchett

9 Years Ago

Good Abdul! ;)


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Abdul Rahman S
Abdul Rahman S

Dindigul, Tamil Nadu, India



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This is Abdul from India. An aspiring novelist and short story writer dreaming of making it big one day and I do agriculture for my living. Also i am doing my electronic engineering privately. Current.. more..

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