I've been browsing through your posted writings and am intrigued by the depth of feeling in some rather simple things... wonder what some of it means. And, that makes good poetry, doesn't it? You don't use a lot of flourish or fancy descriptors to make your point - it's king of like looking at black and white photography. It simply is what it is. I like it. I like the crisp observations and the meaning you find in smoke, color (like the black skirt), melting ice cream and so on. Good work. I'll browse some more, but for now must move on. Happy trails.
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I've been browsing through your posted writings and am intrigued by the depth of feeling in some rather simple things... wonder what some of it means. And, that makes good poetry, doesn't it? You don't use a lot of flourish or fancy descriptors to make your point - it's king of like looking at black and white photography. It simply is what it is. I like it. I like the crisp observations and the meaning you find in smoke, color (like the black skirt), melting ice cream and so on. Good work. I'll browse some more, but for now must move on. Happy trails.