Key Ring

Key Ring

It took me by surprise

her heartbeat,

my ear pressed firmly 

to her skin.

I shuddered 

with insecurities,

lost in sound

the vibration of feeling;

unpredictable.

And she smiled,

put me in her pocket

and fed me a snapdragon.

Lightly brushed by wind

her fingertips electric,

I had a place in her world.

And whatever that world may bring.

She holds me over water,

walking with definition 

in circles sustained,

keeping time with 

a favored song.  

Pulling on the chain

locked around my neck.

Though she has the key.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

quite captivating.....Very good....Though there are a couple of typos I think that you should be aware of..On the 1st line it should be ME instead of MY..And I am not sure if you meant SHUTTERED or SHUDDERED