On the Way Down

 

I float on the wind

Dancing in the heavens

As it grows colder

I gather with my friends

Together we bond we are like

Silken down and feathery cotton

 

We condense and precipitate

I descend from the heavens

I am renewed in form

I am as a tear shed from above

Plummeting earthwards

I am joined by my companions

 

We are like an army

Cascading down in sheets

Thunder is our herald

Lightning our champion

We fill the air with music

As we batter the ground

Reviews

[Constance L. Hartwell]

This is a lovely write. The imagery was amazing. It brought back memories of hanging out with my friends. Kudos

[Sean Allen]

Beautiful poem. There is nothing I would change.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very well written and your imagery is flawless. I like the premise! Good write.....

[Queen Jummarrium]

that touched my soul it was so beautiful and well writen