Perfect

You say try harder

i say im doing my best

you say you dont

want  to hear the rest

 

i just sit here and cry

you tell me im lying 

but mom, i say

i cant fake crying

 

you tell me to calm down

but i cant with you around

 

why do you do this to me?

this isnt how its supposed to be

your supposed to be

nice, loving, kind

but all youve done is...

lost your mind

Reviews

[ambur]

I like the word placement in this piece. I can't say I am too fond of the last couple of lines. It seemed to take away from the piece--just like you surprised the writer by the subject of the poem: a mother. Overall, nice job.