Time

Time

A Poem by Abby w.

It was time

Time to say goodbye

Im sick of this stupid life

Time to pick up the knife

 

I put it close

Close to my wrist

I count to 3

And give the kife

A twist

 

I scream 

I moan

From all the blood 

That has shone

 

I slowly put 

Down the knife

That has ended my life

© 2011 Abby w.


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The flow was good of this poem, although the theme was quite cliche. However, the word choice seemed to match the overall tone.

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Added on July 21, 2011
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Abby w.
Abby w.

Bellingham, WA



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