Falling Down

Falling Down

Falling so hard just can't breath

Down is going threw my head all I can think

Thinking should I?

Falling Down

Why is this so hard to accept whats going on

Why?

Going to the point where every things gone

Falling down why is it hard at first

Falling Down

Reviews

[李[A]]

This message is conveyed quite nicely :). Just a few things,
1) Falling so hard just can't breath -> breathe (typos :P)
2) I like how the use of confusion is used in the last half of the poem.