Humans

Humans

A Story by Abby:)

Humans. Humans are very diffucault. The human mind is one example. Here is just one example that I will explain to you. The human mind is just one of many many examples what is diffucault in the human body. The human mind has many parts, one huge part of the human mind is the brian wich is the human mind if some people did not know.The human brain has very diffrent parts you could not even remember it's mind blowing. The human brain has just a little part of what your whole mind has to learn or has learned. Just amagen what your brain looks like right at this moment. STOP!!!!!!!!!! You can't amagen what your brain looks like right now because your mind can never stop thinking even when your sleeping because the human brain or mind is always working it never stops. So what I mean is you can not think about what the human mind looks like because it never stops.

© 2010 Abby:)


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"diffucault" - "difficult"
period, not comma, after "mind has many parts"
"one huge part of the human mind is the brian wich is the human mind if some people did not know" - "brain" - "which" - comma after "brain" - Actually, there is a lot of controversy about whether the brain is the same as the mind; many people (scientists included) say they are not the same thing.
period after "not even remember"
Nope - I can remember the parts of the brain pretty well....
"amagen" - "imagine"
"STOP!!!!!!!!!!" - way too many exclamation marks - one is plenty
"You can't amagen what your brain looks like right now because your mind can never stop thinking..." - This makes no sense whatsoever.
"when your sleeping" - "you're"
period after "always working"
The mind doesn't look like anything. The brain is another matter, and I can imagine quite well what it looks like, since I've seen a lot of photos of brains.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"diffucault" - "difficult"
period, not comma, after "mind has many parts"
"one huge part of the human mind is the brian wich is the human mind if some people did not know" - "brain" - "which" - comma after "brain" - Actually, there is a lot of controversy about whether the brain is the same as the mind; many people (scientists included) say they are not the same thing.
period after "not even remember"
Nope - I can remember the parts of the brain pretty well....
"amagen" - "imagine"
"STOP!!!!!!!!!!" - way too many exclamation marks - one is plenty
"You can't amagen what your brain looks like right now because your mind can never stop thinking..." - This makes no sense whatsoever.
"when your sleeping" - "you're"
period after "always working"
The mind doesn't look like anything. The brain is another matter, and I can imagine quite well what it looks like, since I've seen a lot of photos of brains.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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