Chapter 2

Finally after a few days somebody asked what did you do or do you feel better or what ever your lie was so now what to do? Do you  make up another lie? Now your guts are gone they went down some dark whole. Because you don't even know who you are any more. So finally you answer there question and now there is a conversation about it so now you are telling lie after lie. Then finally the conversation stops for the night. 

Reviews

[Dawns]

Umm. This has some good ideas but I really think that some, or any proof reading would really help in portraying your ideas. Don't be afraid to use commas or quotation marks because they also provide a lot of clarification as to what is being said by someone. For example something like:
Sean looked across the table. Lets eat grandpa.
Dialogue can be easily distinguished when quotation marks are used. But without proper grammar the meaning of the sentence will still be lost. So:
Sean looked across the table. "Lets eat grandpa".
and finally using a comma the actual message can be portrayed with:
Sean looked across the table. "Lets eat, grandpa"