Silage

~takes bad to recognise good~

A downpour soaks in to soil.
Dirt minerals form beneath the surface.
When each step causes erosion, a reasurrence can mean so much.
An ignorant sun will always rise regardless of the depth of night. So let's put this behind us.

Do words hold more meaning when shouted?
My gut is straining to speak but my spine holds it still.
In silence

Reviews

[emipoemi]

This poem is quite philosophical! Enjoyably so. I must say, though, that it appears like you're writing two different poems, for I can't precisely grasp the connection between the two. Quite frankly, if I may suggest, you could expand on each stanza and write two individual poems, for the two stanzas resonate with respective power that just screams for the necessity to expand on those ideas along individual paths. Give it a try, if you feel up to the challenge. Otherwise:

- I believe in the first line the "in to" should be combined into "into", OR you need a "the" placed before "soil" (I would advise the former)

- "So let's put this behind us" should have it's own line. Also, what's "this"? It's a mystery, and though it's good to leave mysteries and enigmas in poetry for the reader to think about, you should leave some breadcrumbs (antecedents) so that they're able to ponder on it awhile to see if they can figure it out. But there's no antecedent, or at least a clear antecedent, for "this", so either clarify that in a word or two, or simply switch it out for "it all".

Overall, well done! Profound and powerful!