Cloud Free

~gone slushie~

Looking into the horizon, my own laughter washes back to me in waves.
Behind the sky of my own closed eyelids, your smiling face is projected.
And theres something about that smile that sticks to mine, radiating through my head turning thoughts to light.
The sun on our backs, sand beneath our feet. I feel at home with your shadow beside mine.
There is genius in stupidity.
There is a calm to electricity.

Messy but bright, happy you are in my life.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Another gem! And a phenomenal gem at that! Holy kwap! The only thing I have to say, if you don't mind me saying so, is "radiating....." should be on its own line; "I feel at home......" as well. "Messy" has no clear antecedent (kind of like we have to know you in person to understand what this "messy" might mean), so I would suggest to say something else (for tampering with the brilliance of the other lines just to make the "messy" clearer isn't worth it - those lines are too good already), or stay positive on the happiness metaphor before you dive into "happy you are in my life".
"There's" needs an apostrophe. And that is all. This poem is overall soulful and is simply packed with thought-provoking and powerful lines. "There is genius in stupidity/There is calm in electricity" is simply WOW! Stupendous! Absolutely well done!

[UnderTheDeadPoetTree]

This is happy and we stan it