But You Know

You are not here with me,
I still long to hold you,
In my arms, so close
And never let go.

Every time when you have to go,
I fake a smile so you don’t know,
I am desperate to hold you close,
But you know, you know.

Every time you call,
I never cry so you don’t know,
I need you here tonight,
But you know, you know.

I shut my eyes and feel you sleeping by my side,
I never ask you to stay so you don’t know,
I am desperate to hold you close,
But you know, you know.

Oh oh wooh
You know, know.
And every time you leave,
Give me a good bye kiss,
And I want to hold and never let go,
I don’t show it but you know, oh you
That I love you…

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

"Every time when you have to go,
I fake a smile so you don’t know,
I am desperate to hold you close,
But you know, you know."
I know that feeling... never want to let go because there is that feeling of you could lose that forever :) Nice work

[Aayushi]

Yes that feeling something you can't show as well you can't hide. Thanks for the review dear.

[zunie frost]

hello Aauyshi !!!!!
wow !!!! so emotional !!! this is the best love poetry i have read !!!!!!
i like your work !!! so inspiring !!! keep it up
100% ratings as always

[Mayank]

Very touchy and written beautifully.

[Aayushi]

Thanks for reading. :)

[A. Amos]

can't wait to hear this song...once you give music to your words please let me know.

[Aayushi]

Yea I am also waiting for the day when I can put music to my words. Thanks :)

[MsJewel]

The repetition of lines is quite effective and makes the words even more powerful. Love and longing..bittersweet and beautiful. Stunning poetry and picture my friend.

:) Julie

[Aayushi]

Thanks for the lovely review. :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
I can totally understand the emotions of this piece, when someone
dear to your heart is gone, it is a struggle to hold ourselves together:(
Always longing for their return, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Aayushi]

Thanks For the review..