A Girl With a Dream.

There was once a girl, innocent and pure, spreading the love and in search of more. For her the world was a beautiful place, filled with people who loved her, pampered her and cared for her like she was a doll. She finds the world in the embrace of her mother and protection in her father's love. She grew up listening to the stories from her grandmother, the stories about the beautiful princess and her charming prince riding on the white horse, and there magical kiss in which they found the true love and then she sleeps dreaming about her prince and the magical kiss, of course holding her teddy close. She was taught to love and believe and to respect and hope. She was innocently mischievous and mischievously innocent. She danced around placing smiles on so many faces and her giggles were echoed in her house. She was no princess, she didn't have a big garden filled with roses or any sort of luxury but she didn't need any. She was living in heaven until one day her heaven wrecked, she grew up. 

She was no more a kid living under the shadow of her parents but she was a grown up girl surviving the harshness of the world. She now has to face the world which was no more a beautiful place. There were people who ogle at her and their lecherous look just disgust her. When she looked around her there was crime and hatred, where was the love, love which she read in books. She was taught to believe and hope, but where should she put her beliefs in ? What is she suppose to hope for? The treachery of the world taught her that there is nothing like true love, that was all just the stories. There will be no beautiful princess, no charming prince will come for her riding the white horse and surely there won't be any magical kiss. Lust has taken over love and people are selfish and sometimes they will hurt you for fun. So she did what she has to, to survive in this loveless world. She put on a mask. A mask of firmness, a mask of selfishness, a mask of hatred and made people believed that she don't care. But that was for the world so that they don’t think that she is vulnerable and tries to hurt her, deep down in her heart she cared. She cared every time when she saw something bad happening, she cared every time when she saw truth losing to lies, she cared every time when people asked her to be cruel and oversee the wrong but she can't express it, moreover she was not even suppose to feel it. 

She can't take it anymore, the pain, the lies, the cruelty, she wanted to run away but to where, there was nowhere. She was not living but surviving, but then she couldn't take it anymore. She tried to be heard, fought for love but hatred won and gradually consumed her and once a cheerful soul is now burned into ashes and it’s gone. But her spirit is still here amongst us waiting for the victory. She was taught to believe and hope so she is believing in us and hoping that we all will help her to win this war between love and hate. She wants every one of us to win the fight that's going on inside us. Let’s tear off the mask of hate and let the love pour out of us. Let’s not pretend anymore and care for real. Let’s stop the wrong and stand for the right. 

 

She was a girl with a dream...

 

 

 

Reviews

[Stephen]

Very nice, I really liked the concept. The theme you plotted here is wonderful but as you`d wished to have a GENUINE review from me so, here a seductive Stephen and a sexy friend of yous goes ...

To be honest, I find, you`ve just translated this write .. I meant, I don`t think that "English" is your FIRST lang. ... or Is it??? But apart from it, I love that you didn`t make any grammatical mistake, that`s very good and make me impressed cos, most of the writers make grammatical mistakes which make the stuffs very hard to understand but here you`ve got a plus point. Your grammar`s not that bad, its pretty good. I`ve modified your this chapter in my ways ... i`m working on my novel called "REVOLUTION--2014" ... and as you`d mentioned that you`d inspired by me so, yeah .. after reading this write I can say .. you really get inspired by me. That`s very good. Sounds pretty nice. So, here`s below i`ve blended my few thoughts with your this write making your this sexy write more sexy in reading. Hope you`d love to reading my this modification ... have a look below :-

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This story write could be written in the below version making it good reading :-
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An innocent girl with her pure soul spreading the love finding some beauty around this wicked world. To her the world was a beautiful place, filled with the people who loved her every muse which worked for them as a peace of relief. She finds the world in the embraces of her mother and protection in her father's love. In the closing years, she grew up listening to the stories from her beautiful grandmother.. the stories about the white princess and her charming prince riding on the white horse taking her away ... all away to the world of his heart. There magical kiss es found the true love across the seven oceans. She was taught to being loved and believed to respecting of this world ~~ the world where a “Hope” never dies. Because this whole world`s all based on “Hopes.” She was the one!! Yeah, the one in the billion of million of trillion over this magnificent mighty world. The sounds of her fluffy foots reverberated the house with all of her sweet sounding melodic chirp, her voice was the only reason .. a sun raised up in the sky with some lights ~~~ spreading the glory of glory in disguises of hot burnt sun rays. She was no princess, didn't have any big garden filled with roses or any sort of luxuries but yeah, her simplicity was her own CROWN. She was living in her own nirvana till the day her heaven wrecked ~~ her dreams sprawled over the floor in pieces ~~~ she grew up.

She grew up playing with her beautiful dolls, left the childish world behind in her past. There were people who ogle at her and their lecherous look just disgust her. When she looked around the big world found nothing but the red blooded drops of crime in disguise of every object which`s located in the world. The treachery of the world taught her, “there is nothing like true love, everything`s being immortal just in the fairy `s. There won`t be a beautiful intoxicated eyes princess, no charming face prince`d come for her riding the white long fluffy haired horse keeping her all ~~ her whole soft slippery ~~ body in his strong arms.

Love`s replaced with lust so the lust has taken over the love. She`s gifted of God ..but now living in this new age world, she has to wear a mask!! “A mask which`s worn by everyone around this wicked world... a mask of selfishness!!” But was that enough to keep her all away from the sinister souls?? No way!! More she lived in disguise, more she lost her own identity that`s what all she never meant to ... but yeah.. she was kept loosing .. so, she thrown away her mask out the beautiful window right into the deep down darken “Wishing well”

Wishing well`s made to fill the wishes of everyone but it was all worthless for her because she was the real owner of the garden of Eden in her dreams and had neglected to put an option to fill her own wishes too ... but always believed everything happens for a reason so, if she hadn`t neglected that option then she won`t have never learnt how bad the world is or what`s a real worth of “SIMPLICITY”...

Her pain was overlapping her all days and nights. She can`t take it anymore, the pain, the lies, the cruelty, the web of brutal lies, the fake believes, the broken promise, the mighty warmth and so on ... she wanted to run away from everything she finds deadly around this world but to where?? “There was no place where a virtue could stay safe from hell” She`d to face this world, fight for her rights so, she fought!! Yeah, she fought for love , faith, blessings and kindness but the hatred alternatively consumed her aroma making her soul impure ... in a way to get urged leaving some marks on her ... on her pure soul .. on her soft body for life and once a cheerful soul`s burned into the ashes... it could be gone. She never wanted to get spoiled!! She never dreamt to get ruined by the people!! so, she fights !! yeah. She fought for her rights ... she didn`t want to get survived but lived with her pride. She came out the world with her originality ~~~ with her virtue & millions of times she got hurt right into the soft heart of her but she didn`t give up. No one was there to pull her up back except her soul ~~ her own reflection which every time reverberated around her that “You have to win, you are not as same as others, your soul`s as pure as nirvana cus, you onself belong to nirvana . Don`t let the evils win!!! Don`t!!!!” And she heard her own voices of heart and stood up again and again until she got what soever she wanted to. She wins!! Yeah .. the kindness beats the evils!!

No tools. No weapons. No fights. No dislikes but she won the battle of love with her heart which needs and is hungry for a true love not to have lust. Lust`s simply a desire which wants to get quenched making strokes all of nights enjoying the thrill at the night but after the night?? Everything gets fade up!!! No love!! No emotions!! No smile but only tears in the beautiful eyes!! But the true love can never be faded up because it`s all on what the world based on ~~ running with it proficiently since the long decades.

No matter how tough the life is, how awful the time is .... what you all have to do is “ Don`t give up!!” because if you`re true and virtual, no wicked soul can spoil you. Every evily soul always builds bunches of hurdles amid the path of your life but you have to breakthrough all these hurdles if you want to reach to the next shore of life because life`s beautiful which`s meant to be lived with love not lust hated or cried ... if you want to have lust then yeah ... make a love with lust but with EMOTIONS too. Yeah ... love and lust these both things are hungry for the warmth but the heart`s hungry for emotions.

Make love with lust and lust with love caring the emotions of someone and learn and feel & watch through your own eyes how beautiful a life is and if you treat a lust bad then you`d very soon know yourself how worst a life is and how bad it could be ..

Last, She wants every one of us to win the fight that's raising inside us. Let the tears off the mask of hate allowing the love get poured into the fleshes of ours ~~ to get virtual.

“She was a girl with a dream.”


Special note :

Hope you like it. It`s not a disrespect at all. I just treat you as a sexy friend of mine so, as a sexy friend of yous I tried to help you so that you could run over the strips of success and get success every-time. We`re all here to learn and this site is for each of us who are desperate to learn making some conversations and helping people`s out. If my words hurt you or you take this MODIFICATION as a disrespect then "My apologies." Just discard my write. I hate making HOT CHICKS sad ;) Anyway, hey keep writing and believe me, I just love the themes you always come up with :)

All the best for your upcoming writes!

[Aayushi]

No. not taking it as a disrespect but I am so thankful to you that you took time to read it and make it so better. Thanks...

[Stephen]

Having your reply .. I think, you didn`t like my review .. did you? Lol Nevermind, just ignore my words, sometimes, I became so helpful and this`s my strength and my weakness either but yeah .. i`m all working on it to improve myself doing less help .. lol hope to become a sexy perspnality around the world someday ... Anyway, your write`s already well penned!!

[Aayushi]

No I you misunderstood my words I said am so thankful that you took out some time and re write my work and made it better. Your version no doubt was a better one...