Will You?

My nights were haunted by my sorrows
Pain turned my heart cold…
I was afraid and isolated
Searching for the answers that never existed…

My life filled with loneliness
You came and ease the pain…
I stop hurting myself
I was no longer weak…

You taught me to forget and forgive
You taught me to move on and live…
Life doesn't seem unfair anymore
Am not hurting anymore…

So here I go again
Dancing to the music of life…
But I want to ask you
Will you dance with me?

Reviews

[Stephen]

Lol...ending is very interesting. I have written a play "DANCING ALL THE NIGHT"...a couple of weeks ago n the ending of the poem reminded me of my own play that I love the most.

All the latest emotions, you have distilled into the paper, ate get mixtured up with the greatest words n which's all what that makes the poem the best I have read throughout the day. I love reading your stuffs. If you have plans for writing novels too then it would be an honour to me to read your novels too. Keep penning!!

[Aayushi]

Thanks Stephen and now its my turn.I will be honored to read your stuff. Kindly share your blog address with me in the mail. :)

[Stephen]

My pleasure. No..it's really ok..no need to waste your time at my WORST blogs ..lol. you won't love my blogs n songs. Lol

[Aayushi]

I will surely let you know that if I wasted my time or invested it in reading your blog...first let me read.

[Stephen]

Lol. Let's see. Check out your mail box...am gonna send some links via mail but hey be sure. ..Don't spread the links outside cus I never share my links to anyone until I know them.....is it ok???

[Aayushi]

Yea cool...

[Stephen]

Great. Thanks.

[Endeavor]

This is one lovable piece. Every line is like a gentle wave of distinct emotions.

Just one thing about the use of ellipsis and some agreement errors. :)

Thank you for sharing!