Kiss Me

I look in your dazzling eyes
And  lost in the world of dreams
I hold your hands
And I just can't resist you...

Its so long you have told me
That how much you love me
So just get close to me
and kiss kiss kiss me...

You gimme that look and cross my heart
You let me be the way I am
oh baby ohhh baby
I have gone crazy from the moment I met you...

Its so long you have told me
That how much you love me
So just get close to me
and kiss kiss kiss me...

I want you so much
and I need you so much
and I love you so much
that's its just killing, killing killing me...

So just get close to me
and kiss kiss kiss me...
oh yeah...
So why don't you just kiss me baby...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Stephen]

Lol. I think, your very naughty but I love the beat of your words which came outta your heart.
Heyy ... replace the line "You let me be the way I are" with "You let me be the way I am" overall is cool. May be you were missing your someone much on 6th.April since you penned this write, yeah, I can feel the feelings of love cus, it's very sinful and believe me once you get poured into the drops of love, you can never come back until your life won't want you to and I happen to believe, love's actually blind cus, i've many cases of my friends who're damn blind on love .. lol I enjoyed this poem, it's seemed a song. Very nice one.

Keep up the great work!

[Aayushi]

Lol thanks for your review and I know its grammatically wrong but " I are" was the best fit and I think grammar is not what we should keep in mind while writing a song but if it was a poem i would have used " I am". Am I right??

[Stephen]

My pleasure but pretty...whatever you said is totally outta my mind cus when I searched on a Google...it's showed me a song "The way I are" but am still confused ....anyway if you time then I would like to remove my confusion n learn from you something. But honey whether it is a song or a poem I always try to put best grammar anyway if you can more explain about it then it would be much appreciated if not then it's all cool..I really liked the song :) keep up the good work!

[Aayushi]

Yea sure...mail me