A Cute Depression

A Cute Depression

A Poem by AaronGrey
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Hearing beeps at the back of my head again
trying hard not to think of the light
Listening to women begging for water again
wasted another old and mangled night

One more time may be enough to feel loved
I force myself to keep the ending out
If I came here of my own tuition
then maybe I can kick me out

© 2012 AaronGrey


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AaronGrey
don't be too mean haha

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It's truly quite cute... I'm thinking... Dorm room... The character thinking: I don't want to get up, please let me sleep...

But then the person remembered that his parents are paying so he or she has no choice but to get up...

Overall, it does justice to title A cute depression... temporary but completely natural.

Btw, correct me if I'm wrong but isn't "A cute" spelled as one word "Acute" ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronGrey

12 Years Ago

yeah, i was kind of using a play on words there :)



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It's truly quite cute... I'm thinking... Dorm room... The character thinking: I don't want to get up, please let me sleep...

But then the person remembered that his parents are paying so he or she has no choice but to get up...

Overall, it does justice to title A cute depression... temporary but completely natural.

Btw, correct me if I'm wrong but isn't "A cute" spelled as one word "Acute" ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronGrey

12 Years Ago

yeah, i was kind of using a play on words there :)

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Added on November 30, 2012
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AaronGrey
AaronGrey

Yuma, AZ



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