Paralysed Heart..!

No much to say, words are enough ...!

Ink flows again 

Carving the design of paralyse heart

Silence prevail, 

Heart stops to feel 

Numbness appear, 

Nerves loss the destiny

Agony hugs,

Cries broke the mirror

Tear touches,

Eyes begins to see dark

Chest wails,

Beats fail to live

At last Heart paralyse

Death begins to survive

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Wow...very dark write with poignant feelings of despair. Well written. ~Sharon

[Aaqib Javaid]

Thanks ma'm fa ur lines...! :)

[Miss Sharon]

You are very welcome! ~Sharon

[Maumil Mehraj]

Such a powerful write...
"Death begins to survive", very profound line
You've conveyed the experience of death with perfection....great work!
Maumil

[Aaqib Javaid]

Thank you Maumil... :)
Kaleam likhaty rahay, kaleam chaltay rahay;
Bus dekhna ye tha ki sehayi Khoon ki thi ya thi paani ki.... :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Beautiful! :)

[Aaqib Javaid]

Shukriya..