fever-dream

fever-dream

A Poem by kimpetersen13kp
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about falling for you—cosmically, messing up (metabolically), throwing tea across the room, breaking in glass windows—just for the fun of it, scrapped kness, people watching me do things to you

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I'm not even mad. Any memory, whether it has been marred by the blackness of you, who didn't care to cradle me when I exposed to you my infantile self, my still-figuring-things-out hesitancy, any memory with you is cherished. Worshipped. There is an hypnosis to the dance between the bitter-sweetness of us last night--enveloped, encapsulated--verses us today--dislodged, denatured--that mesmerizes me. That consumes me--rabidly. Metabolically. Last night was a fever-dream. A spell.

© 2024 kimpetersen13kp


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Daz
I like your choice of words here. Definitely kept my interest, and let's the reader into your world.

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kimpetersen13kp

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. I always think no one really reads these things. I'm grat.. read more
Daz

3 Months Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on May 22, 2022
Last Updated on April 5, 2024
Tags: Falling, cosmically, messing up, scrapped kness, people watching, romanticism, poetry, art, philosophy, academia, dark academia

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kimpetersen13kp
kimpetersen13kp

cape town, South Africa



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Hi. I'm Kim. I enjoy writing and reading poetry. You can support my writing journey here: https://ko-fi.com/kimpetersen13kp1644 more..

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