WHO IS SHE?

This poem conveys us How a man in love describe about her.

WHO IS SHE?

To spread fragrance in my life full of toxic turns,

She is an incense stick, who suffers many burns.

 

While me being the sun, harming her eyes and skin,

She is a fullmoon, offering me peace around and within.

 

“I need rest to tackle upcoming humiliations”, my heart cries,

She is a light that fills darkness when I close my eyes.

 

While I was lost in her thoughts, pretending everything is fine,

She is the cutest thief, who steals every inch that is mine.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Nice metaphor...you bring the sun and the moon to life as lovers, entwined in their own universe....light and darkness...she fulfills....He is enamored by her, even though she is clever and most likely not pure at all...she may even be mischievous.....in her playful way.....very lovely, emotional write!
Warmly, B

[Aalaapanascribbles]

Thanks a lot!

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!
Warmly
B