Into The Mist

SINCE there is no "song" Type. I just put story, because It basically tells a story of a girl/boy who is very much in pain, and finds herself in a desperate cry for help.

 

(Verse 1)

Don’t turn around and say goodbye;

Don’t look about and say goodnight;

Don’t ever say never; again.

You play the blade like a violin;

Out of tune and no melody;

This is your only way;

To destroy what’s left of your body;

 

(Chorus)

You’re such a beautiful tragedy;

All say you were never ready;

You never sought to see the end;

All we wanted to do was mend;

You were walking into the mist;

So blind and so pissed;

But the greatest thing you’ve missed;

Was me;

 

(Verse 2)

I’m trying to stand here and relinquish the fear;

I want you see that guiding light;

Please, come follow me;

It seems like your world is crashing down;

Everything just tumbles to the ground;

Nothing seems right;

Believe me, you’re wrong;

 

(Chorus)

You’re such a beautiful tragedy;

All say you were never ready;

You never sought to see the end;

All we wanted to do was mend;

You were walking into the mist;

So blind, and so pissed;

But the greatest thing you’ve missed;

Was me;

 

(Bridge)

I see you in pain and in anguish;

I see you mock everyone around you;

I see you must envy everyone too;

You think they’re so happy;

You wish you could be them;

All I want is for you to be the same;

 

(Chorus)

You’re such a beautiful tragedy;

All say you were never ready;

You never sought to see the end;

All we wanted to do was mend;

You were walking into the mist;

So blind, and so pissed;

But the greatest thing you’ve missed;

Was me;

 

(Pre-Ending Chorus)

There are more than just me;

Who want to help you be set free;

Just please believe in…me.

 

(End Chorus)

You’re such a beautiful tragedy;

All say you were never ready;

You never sought to see the end;

All we wanted to do was mend;
You were walking into the mist;
So blind, and so pissed;
But the greatest thing you’ve missed;
Was me;

 

Author's Note

Please don't criticize the writing. I'm very new to this stuff. I've just started putting down other people's problems into song format so it helps me figure out how to help them. Of if anyone needs help.

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Great job, nicely written poem/song. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Tai Chi Italy]

interesting song Helping hand! was that ok?lol Yeah we are all highly sensitive, if we are writers and poets are even worse, but that is the curse of the muse, it has it's up moments to, many infact and if I were you, I would accept constructive crit, I point out spellings and typos occasionally, because this is a writers site my friend. I did like the lines 'beautiful tragedy, it felt fitting! Smiling at you, looking forward to reading more, Tai