B***h Wake-up

Every time I’m feeling down,

And I look in the mirror and want to drown,

My inner self stares at me and frowns,

B***h it’s a brand-new day so f*****g go outside and play!

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

Sometimes the truth we so desperately seek is just in front of us, and you totally captured that in your lovely words, well done!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :D

[C.C. Marx]

Agreed with Amanda, the title is a real eye catcher! I like this, the perfect amount of attitude

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure

[Andie]

The title made me check it out. X)
Nice one. Good message.

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha! Thank you. :)

[Andie]

Anytime! :3

[Darkening Shadow]

Nice message! Great Piece!!!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you

[Junert]

The term b***h has become so accepted that one will use it for oneself? Image or not, b***h is a female dog.

[first second third]

strait blunt and to the point... its good.. i like it.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a b***h is a dog a decent dog, though we all need to kick our own arses into gear from time to time, especially if nobody else is going to do it for you

[AWickedMoon]

I know its a dog, but I was going more for the slang version. We do need that extra little push sometimes. :)

[Hatchling]

nice