Paranoia

 

After dark, when the sun doth set,

The creatures of the eventide take their revenge,

The land they will pillage, in the name of curiosity and darker desires,

A formidable foe, hiding in the shadows, that everyone should know,

These creatures of the night do not need the light.

They tickle your leg, and scratch at your mind,

Like a needle they inject a poison that spreads,

Like a yawn it ensnares, and slowly pulls others in...

Author's Note

Let Me know what you think!

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

What do I think?????? Damn good Wicked!! For me this is one of my favourite piece's from you.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

Seems pretty cut and dried. They take; they pillage; they inject...not a lot of ambiguous paranoia here, just a whole lot of yikes. Nice job.

[AWickedMoon]

Wait so you didnt or did like it? Also I really couldnt think of anything better for the name im open to sugesstions! :)

[KAOlmsted]

*laugh* Well, "Nice job" usually implies you did a nice job ;-) Yes, I liked it. Hmm...not really my genre, I wouldn't even know where to begin with suggesting a title. I don't know the significance to eventide in relevance to this piece, but it seems as good a title as any...or you could just go with Yikes xD

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha i wasent sure as you said cut and dry,eventide means evening hm that might be a good idea.

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure, glad I could help.