Paranoia

 

After dark, when the sun doth set,

The creatures of the eventide take their revenge,

The land they will pillage, in the name of curiosity and darker desires,

A formidable foe, hiding in the shadows, that everyone should know,

These creatures of the night do not need the light.

They tickle your leg, and scratch at your mind,

Like a needle they inject a poison that spreads,

Like a yawn it ensnares, and slowly pulls others in...

Author's Note

Let Me know what you think!

Reviews

[modtoddinc]

Devilishly divine... (ensnares?) =))

[AWickedMoon]

I honestly just noticed that as I was re-reading the end! Thank you! :)

[poetickeys]

Shivers! Love the ending!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Enigma]

A very odd, cold shiver went up my spine.... I LOVED it! You have an very interesting way with words.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Darkening Shadow]

Love the tone, but I think you should use more of the words like "doth". I can't think of the type language. It could make it sound really cool. Great Write! Loved it!

[Gaston Sanders]

An antsy sort of feeling just crept up my spine...I loved it !! WickedMoon, you rock!

[AWickedMoon]

Hehe thats what I was going for glad it work! Thankyou! :)

[Zachary_James]

A very mysterious write, dark. Loved it

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[being me]

true as the darkness always nourishes the devil...its mostly at night that evil comes alive

[Calibaster]

Wow, this is really good! And has a lot of truth in it too.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[Calibaster]

You're welcome.

[minnie:)]

Wow that really pulls sum1 into the poem. I love how its written

[AWickedMoon]

sum 1?

[first second third]

it does fit it really does, i mean i could be thinking too outside the box but i liked it