D/s Romance

Based around the romance of two villain lovers.

 

Your heart is like a pack of hyenas, ripping every last shred,

So let’s take our argument into bed,

And I’ll just have to hope I don’t wind up dead.

You kicked me out you kicked me down,

You heartless clown.

But I won’t frown ill just kick your damn door down!

It took a few stories for me to plunge back to reality,

That night the window wasn’t the only thing that shattered,

My only friend picking up the pieces of me crumpled in the street,

In the asylum bed I lay broken and cracked, telling jack to never come back

Only for him to come barging in with his wicked smile placed upon a purple soaked rose,

A laugh escapes my lips and he joins me, for now his rage is tamed

 And I leap back into his unwelcoming arms,

But really who else could really love all of me,

 Then a psychopath you see.

My puddin’ in his purple suit!

Author's Note

Not my best work, if you cant guess whos its about well... Then I have failed.


Was listening to "perfect little punching bag" well writing this.
(Picture borrowed from google)
Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[spiritwind]

I have absolutely no idea who this is about and furthermore I don't care---I enjoyed the journey this psychotic poem took me on and I think your writing was excellent and you know how to put your reader in someone else's mind, even a slightly wacko one! Kudos!!!

[AWickedMoon]

:( Well I'm glad the first person got it haha its about The Joker and Harley Quinn. And Thank you! :)

[Darkening Shadow]

It good. Great Write!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Salar Majak]

Awwww this is crazy weird. And funny and creepy and scary at the same time!!!i just loveee it

[AWickedMoon]

:) Thank you

[ThomasJay]

I love it! I had an inkling from the start but heartless clown gave it away :)

[AWickedMoon]

:) I thought so wasent sure if I liked that part about the clown

[keyvan]

nice poem.......

[first second third]

i had absolutly no idea who this was talking about but now i realize this write to me to a different world. it took me off to be in the same room bravo well done

[AWickedMoon]

Ah im confused!

[first second third]

hahah sorry my words get mixed easily this poem made it like i was in that aslyum with them and saw the phyco. very well done. again sorry

[AWickedMoon]

Ah no problem I thought i was going in- well more insane. Its about the Joker ;P

[first second third]

its very good keep it up:)

[scripted]

The Joker would be my first guess... Did I guess it right? Well it doesn't matter because I didn't read it with that question in mind. I read it to give an honest reivew... so in that case I must say that this is a well writen poem. Your word usage was good along with the way you penned it. Thank you for sharing yours truely danielle

[AWickedMoon]

Yes!!! Yes it was about the Joker and Harley Quinn. Ha-ha! Thankyou. :)

[Rob Santana]

Psychopathic relationship, haha love it. Two villians? Sounds like the joker from Batman and a lady friend. Really cool piece.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! Yup its Joker and Harley Quinn! My heros ha-ha! :)

[Monster ^.^]

spooky and psychotic! I'm thinking about a clown... at some point... hahaha

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha well he's known as "the Clown Prince of Crime" or The Joker and his gal Harley Quinn. :)

[being me]

i don't know who this is about but well i loved a couple of the lines. it seems so good:)
hat night the window wasn’t the only thing that shattered,

My only friend picking up the pieces of me crumpled in the street,

In the asylum bed I lay broken and cracked,
But really who else could really love all of me,

Then a psychopath you see.

[AWickedMoon]

:) Thank you. Its about The Joker and Harley Quinn