A Fairies Forest

My inpiration was this amazing photo taken by martinmajer check out more of his beautiful works here http://martinmajer.deviantart.com/art/Magical-forest-350311050

 

 

 

 

 

 

In the silent mist, my thoughts do wander,

Upon a lily pad I ponder,

That man pacing up yonder,

I hear the leafs crunching beneath his feet,

What does he carry in his hands?

It clicks and shudders,

A weapon I wonder as he points it at my favorite trees,

It clicks, a flash, yet my tree is still intact?

A closer glace?-I don’t think I will chance,

 

And so I scurry away still unseen for the day

Author's Note

My attempt at a "unique" style. Please let me know what you think! :)

Reviews

[Enigma]

This makes me want to sing, "I do believe in fairies!" Beautiful!

[spiritwind]

I applaud your style!
It's quite magical actually.
I love the simplicity of this
and the artful way you put the reader into the scene
with a modicum of fuss.
This is really a deceptively good piece of writing!

[AWickedMoon]

You always leave such great reviews spiritwind, thank you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

Oh how clever! I really like this. Well done.

[AWickedMoon]

:D Thank you!

[KAOlmsted]

Absolutely.

[Calibaster]

Well, it is very unique. You did a great job!

[Megara]

cool

[Rob Santana]

Sooooo what was the man doing? It is a good poem.

[AWickedMoon]

He is a photographer. I was on this page "http://martinmajer.deviantart.com/art/Magical-forest-350311050" and I for some reason thought of fairies spying on him (but the awesome kind, slightly evil like in Wicked Lovely). That photographer has absolutely stunning photos. 

[Darkening Shadow]

Its good very vague and makes reader wonder what the man was doing. Great Write!!

[AWickedMoon]

A photographer. :)

[Darkening Shadow]

oh, well that makes more sense.. Ignore my blondness. Great Poem!

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha its ok im blonde too. :)

[Darkening Shadow]

=] lol aren't we all at some point

[AWickedMoon]

Deffinatly, unfortunatly for me im blonde ALL the time. XP

[Darkening Shadow]

Nice LOL XD

[MOON]

Beautiful words delicate touch.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

This is beautifully unique, well formatted, and written nicely. Nice!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you Angel. :)

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

You are very welcome. ;)

[L. Catherine]

The style is different, but as you said, also unique. Well done!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[L. Catherine]

Welcome!