Cotton candy Clouds

Cotton candy Clouds

A Poem by AWickedMoon
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A poem for the picture I took.

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Oh I must be so high,

To be prancing around such beautiful clouds,

Oh to taste the blue raspberries and strawberries floating in the sky,

Not even the purple monkeys can compare,

This strange cotton candy air.

© 2013 AWickedMoon


Author's Note

AWickedMoon
Just so you know i've never been high but I have been around people that have...(hence the purple monkey joke). I took this picture a few days ago well going to see Indiana Jones 3 in theatres!!!!!

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This would have been so much better (for me) without the Author's note...

Funny how you managed to get "raspberries" right, but strawberries eluded you. And, I have to confess, I have been rather high...a time or two...in my youth ;-) but I have no clue what purple monkeys are xD I love the visual, though.

Good on ya.

p.s. that last line f*****g rocks *pardon my French* ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Ha-ha thank you for pointing that out, how I did miss that i'm not sure. I guess the purple monkeys.. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

xD I knew it had to be something like that! My pleasure, always.
AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

:D



Reviews

Delightful!
A perfect high!
No harm, no foul, just cotton candy air!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Wow, I love the sunset! But being High. Well. that's against my religion! But great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Ha-ha thank-you. I've never been high before, it was more of a its so beautiful that you could get .. read more
Calibaster

11 Years Ago

No kidding! I really adore how the clouds look at sunset!
makes me crave candy:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Ha-ha me two I was thinking aboue cotton candy all day yesterday, trying to figure out what flavour .. read more
Megara

11 Years Ago

:)
Nice pic and poem. Oh and just so you know I was really high last weekend like I was in a train wreck . Hence the train wreck joke. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Haha, oh dear. Thank you creeper. :)
This would have been so much better (for me) without the Author's note...

Funny how you managed to get "raspberries" right, but strawberries eluded you. And, I have to confess, I have been rather high...a time or two...in my youth ;-) but I have no clue what purple monkeys are xD I love the visual, though.

Good on ya.

p.s. that last line f*****g rocks *pardon my French* ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Ha-ha thank you for pointing that out, how I did miss that i'm not sure. I guess the purple monkeys.. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

xD I knew it had to be something like that! My pleasure, always.
AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

:D
lol So high, "high in the sky" that you are oxygen depraved maybe :). I like it lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Ha-ha! Exactly. Thank you Norma. :)
Now, I want to taste something like that! What a delight!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
So simple and pretty, love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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