Oh the rain drops are falling on my head

A song I randomly thought of the lines from a song "rain drops keep falling on my head" and I kinda got creative...

Oh the rain drops are falling on my head

 

Oh how I wish that you were dead,

But for now I’ll have to wait and cry,

Until someone can make you die,

 

Oh the rain drops are falling on my head,

 

Why is it that I am the one that’s dead?

I’m not the one to drink and drive,

Yet you still seem to be alive,

 

Oh the rain drops are falling on my head

 

I guess they just laid down my head,

Why couldn’t you just take a ride,

Now I have to watch them cry,

 

Oh the rain drops are falling on my head-stone.

Author's Note

Picture from google. Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Calibaster]

Wow, that was really depressing, but it's a very true story, it happens all the time. How awful! I'm glad that my religion teaches against drinking, let alone driving at the same time! Great job though! :) Keep up the good work! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ;)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you :) What religon do you practice?

[Calibaster]

I am a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter day saints(LDS), more commonly known as a Mormon. Although most people haven't heard of us, and the majority of those that do think we practice polygamy, we ... well, we just don't have horns, Okay? :) :) :) :) :) I'm probably boring you, so, ... yeah. ;)

[AWickedMoon]

Oh I've heard of it I have three friends who are mormon. Your not boring me I like learning about diffrent cultures. I supose I am pagan or polytheism as I belief in more then one god or goddesses depending on who you ask. (I'm big on the goddess Hathor;egyptian) Pretty much I belive that all religons exist. :)

[Calibaster]

Huh, I've never heard someone with that take on things before!! :)

[AWickedMoon]

:) Learn something new everyday right!

[Calibaster]

I guess so!!

[ThomasJay]

Remind me not to read your poetry before noon! I am not prepared for something so serious and mood changing so early in the day :( but it is pretty amazing.

[AWickedMoon]

Haha! :P

[Darkening Shadow]

This was sad and true but i love the last sentence how it changes what every line like that has said

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! I don't know if you intended this to be funny, but it was. Thanks for sharing ;-)

[IndigoChild]

wow its defiantly out there. I like how " in the face it is" it is descriptive and simple at the same time. Keep up the good work

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Rob Santana]

What a bizarre/creepy creative write. I love it!!!! Bizarre is what I love.Good job.

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha thank-you!