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Possible song?

There is something wrong with a world where,

in some places you cant event see the sun.

Every where Nothing's being done,

 

 

Products are getting more expensive,

Yet the pay checks get smaller.

 

Where food is more readily available,

Yet more people are starving,

 

Where the world is richer,

Yet the majority are poor,

 

Where peace is promoted,

Yet people still drop to the floor.

 

Where science is advancing,

Yet nothings getting cured,

Author's Note

Unfinished, but let me know what you think.

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

love the duality of these lines, the constant oppositions of concepts, ideas. A struggle between life and death, depending on your luck, your survival skills, and the battles you choose to fight. Interesting read, thanks for sharing!

[AWickedMoon]

I'm glad you liked it! I hope you keep leaving awesome coments too! ;)

[Mary Pipikakis]

Seriously thought productive! :)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)