Boots

Boots

A Poem by AWickedMoon
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Um... bored... at work? Yes that sounds like a good excuse. Enjoy my rant!

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Thump,

                Thump,

                                Thump,

The sounds of those boots down the hallway,

They fill me with awe,

Dumbstruck with their adrenaline,

To go the places they have been,

Thru grass and mud,

Thru sand and water,

Wind and rain,

Blood and tears,

If you listen they tell a story,

But you must pay a price,

For what they have seen only there master can know,

But if you dare to listen,

His master’s blade will meet your throat.

© 2013 AWickedMoon


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Damn you do a wonderful job I love the imagery and suspence

Posted 11 Years Ago


AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
Powerful! Great Description!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Thankyou I wasent really sure if it worked or not ha-ha!
I just so happen to be wearing my most oldest and favorite pair of boots!! I couldn't help but laugh, I love it!! Great ending, awesome poem.
:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Thats awesome! thank you!
Enigma

11 Years Ago

Your welcome
:)
Did you mean to spell through like that? Probably :) knowing you!! Great job though, it tells a story. Three lines up from the bottom, you used the wrong there, it should have been their. Great job!!! :) :) (with a very interesting twist at the end!! :)

:)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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AWickedMoon

Calgary, I am a fan of the egyptian gods, Canada



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